B3 remembered this caption as saying "...working to end childhood children." So the true gaffe isn't nearly as bad as it could have been:
"Women Ending Hunger held the inaugural Food for Thought rally in 2010 to raise awareness about the plight of childhood children."
Think MST3K. Inspired by insipid insights: from reporters' mouths to your brain. [Notice both the alliteration and the oxymoron!] Honestly I don't pay much attention to the news, but sometimes my brain hears a phrase and just ... just ... freezes up because it can't process the nonsense. Feel free to send me your observations and I will post!
Showing posts with label word choice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label word choice. Show all posts
Monday, September 12, 2011
Friday, September 2, 2011
Word choices is good
B3 has been sending me some good ones. Here's one (I'm behind, so I need to hunt for the others, sorry!):
"What those initial findings found is the temperatures on the mainstem is controlled by the dams."
Two comments: inanimates in action! And tense, of course.
1. Initial findings found something? A better start to the phrase might be, "The initial finding is the temperatures...."
2. And if the object is "temperatures" then we need "are controlled"
"What those initial findings found is the temperatures on the mainstem is controlled by the dams."
Two comments: inanimates in action! And tense, of course.
1. Initial findings found something? A better start to the phrase might be, "The initial finding is the temperatures...."
2. And if the object is "temperatures" then we need "are controlled"
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